Contoh email yang baik untuk memohon pekerjaan

Assalamualaikum job-seeker,

Selain mencari dan memohon pekerjaan melalui PSC Recruitment dan Jobcentre Brunei, I am pretty sure biskita ada jua pernah mencari-cari dan memohon pekerjaan melalui website atau social media. Probably biskita rancak menghantar-hantar CV through both mails and email to these prospect employers. 

For this post, I intend to highlight beberapa perkara penting jika biskita ingin memohon pekerjaan melalui email:




1. Use a "professional" email address

Nobody will take you seriously if you use email address macam ane:  "PwencesManja123@hotmail.com". Therefore, it is more appropriate memakai email yang ada (ringkasan) nama sendiri. Contoh: Nurul.Afiqah@hotmail.com.  Sounds more professional kan? 

2. Subjek

Pastikan email permohonan pekerjaan biskita ada "subjek". For example: Memohon Jawatan Kosong sebagai (nama Jawatan).  Ane bagi memastikan bakal majikan tahu tujuan  email atu dihantar. Sometimes bisduranag ane menerima banyak email setiap hari. Kalau email atu dari seseorang yang inda dikenali, ditakuti kana label as "spam" dan akan di delete. 

3. Isi Email

Jangan dibiarkan isi email biskita kosong dan hanya memasukkan attachment CV biskita sahaja. Jangan jadi pemalas okay!

Sebaiknya take time to briefly introduce yourself and your background in your email, kirakan macam a cover letter dalam email. 

Berikut adalah relevant information that can be included in your email:
  • Nama penuh
  • Sumber Iklan kekosongan pekerjaan (Website/ Suratkhabar/ Social Media etc)
  • Education bankground and/or Working Experiences
  • Kenapa biskita berminat memohon jawatan kosong atu?
  • Maklumat perhubungan biskita (Nombor telefon/ emel)
  • Memaklumkan bahawa emel biskita menyertakan dokumen-dokumen lain seperti CV, sijil-sijil dan lain-lain. 
  • Ucapan penutup dan Terima Kasih
Berikut aku sertakan beberapa contoh email permohonan kerja yang bisai: 








4. Format untuk resume dan lain-lain dokumen

Sebaiknya gunak format pdf untuk resume dan lain-lain dokumen. Tujuannya ialah supaya isi resume dan dokumen-dokumen yang biskita hantar inda tertukar formatnya apabila dibuka di laptop atau komputer bakal majikan. Jadi CV dan dokumen penting tersebut masih lagi tersusun seperti yang biskita hantar jua.  

Namakan jua dokumen-dokumen yang dihantar atu e.g. ResumeNurulAfiqah.pdf, SijilHNDNurulAfiqah.pdf dan lain-lain.  


5. Always check email yang dikarang and attachment

Sesudah siap everything, please check balik email biskita sebelum disend. Check segala kesalahan ejaan atau ayat dan semua attachment yang dihantar atu lurus, nda tersalah sijil-sijil peradian dihantar. 

Another contoh

Berikut ialah contoh Email yang aku pernah hantar to my current employer. Tapi aku omit some information lah untuk protect privacy sendiri hehehe... My contoh also may not be as good and as "padat" information nya macam yang diatas, but I hope it can give you some ideas and individuality in your email. 

To: HR Manager
Subject: Applying for vacancy as (Name of position)

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is (Fullname), and I am very interested to apply for a job position as (Name of position) at (Name of School). 

To share briefly about myself, I am 27 years old, Bruneian and hold a bachelor degree in (Name of degree) from (Name of University). I also did a Master degree in (Name of Master degree), specializing in (area of specialization) from (Name of University). I am due to graduate from my Master degree in September or October this year, In sha Allah. 

I have a number of experiences working as a teacher. Prior to undertaking my master degree, I was a relief teacher for special need students at (Name of school) in 2015. I also did a part-time tutoring for Bahasa Melayu subject for primary 4 to 6 at (Name of Tuition school) since 2015. 

During my master degree, I was given an opportunity to do school attachment in government preschools, namely (Name of schools). 

I am very interested to apply for this position as I believe I have both necessary skills and related experience. At the same time, I am looking for a long-term career prospect. I believe the school could provide me with more exciting as well as motivating working experience. 

With this email, I include my CV with details of my education background as well as previous working experiences. I also included details of references whom you may contact if you wish. I hope you can consider my application, and I look forward to hearing from you. 

Thank you. 

Sincerely,
(Full name)
Contact no: +673 8822441
Email: Bazilah@gmail.com


Sumber tips ane aku perolehi dari Tips Ringkas Untuk Memohon Kerja Melalui Email Dengan Betul, which aku personally ikut tips-tips nya before sending my CV through email to prospect employers. Alhamdulilah, ada a few schools and companies took some time to reply to my email (walaupun kana reject or nada vacancy). 

Semoga tips yang dikongsikan bermanfaat. 

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